[yocto] [PATCH] Documentation: Small number of minor fixes to Ch 1, ref manual

Robert P. J. Day rpjday at crashcourse.ca
Tue Nov 5 00:00:52 PST 2013


 * couple grammar/typo fixes
 * "OpenSUSE" -> "openSUSE"

Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday at crashcourse.ca>

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diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/introduction.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/introduction.xml
index 3977d73..023e863 100644
--- a/documentation/ref-manual/introduction.xml
+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/introduction.xml
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@
                     Refer to
                     <ulink url='&OE_HOME_URL;/index.php?title=OEandYourDistro'>OE and Your Distro</ulink> and
                     <ulink url='&OE_HOME_URL;/index.php?title=Required_software'>Required Software</ulink>
-                    for information for information about dependencies and
+                    for information about dependencies and
                     requirements.
                     If you encounter problems, please go to
                     <ulink url='&YOCTO_BUGZILLA_URL;'>Yocto Project Bugzilla</ulink>
@@ -251,11 +251,11 @@
         </section>

         <section id='opensuse-packages'>
-            <title>OpenSUSE Packages</title>
+            <title>openSUSE Packages</title>

             <para>
                 The following list shows the required packages by function
-                given a supported OpenSUSE Linux distribution:
+                given a supported openSUSE Linux distribution:
                 <itemizedlist>
                     <listitem><para><emphasis>Essentials:</emphasis>
                         Packages needed to build an image for a headless
@@ -346,8 +346,8 @@
             you can resolve this by either downloading a pre-built tarball
             containing these tools, or building such a tarball on another
             system.
-            Regardless of the method, once you have the tarball you simply
-            install it somewhere on you system, such as a directory in your
+            Regardless of the method, once you have the tarball, you simply
+            install it somewhere on your system, such as a directory in your
             home directory, and then source the environment script provided,
             which adds the tools into <filename>PATH</filename> and sets
             any other environment variables required to run the tools.

rday

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