[yocto] [PATCH] Documentation: Pedantic tweaks to ref manual, usingpoky.xml

[Rifenbark, Scott M]

Robert, 

Patch applied... thanks.

Scott

>-----Original Message-----
>From: Robert P. J. Day [mailto:rpjday at crashcourse.ca]
>Sent: Tuesday, November 05, 2013 1:32 AM
>To: Yocto discussion list
>Cc: Rifenbark, Scott M
>Subject: [PATCH] Documentation: Pedantic tweaks to ref manual,
>usingpoky.xml
>
>
>Signed-off-by: Robert P. J. Day <rpjday at crashcourse.ca>
>
>---
>
>diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml b/documentation/ref-
>manual/usingpoky.xml
>index b00e7bc..1edc9ea 100644
>--- a/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml
>+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml
>@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
>         </para>
>
>         <para>
>-            The <filename>build_dir</filename> is optional and specifies the
>directory the
>+            The <filename>build_dir</filename> argument is optional and
>+ specifies the directory the
>             OpenEmbedded build system uses for the build -
>             the <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#build-directory'>Build
>Directory</ulink>.
>             If you do not specify a Build Directory, it defaults to a directory @@ -
>72,7 +72,7 @@
>
>         <note>
>             Building an image without GNU General Public License Version 3
>(GPLv3) components
>-            is only supported for minimal and base images.
>+            is supported for only minimal and base images.
>             See the "<link linkend='ref-images'>Images</link>" chapter for more
>information.
>         </note>
>     </section>
>@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@
>             <filename>package_write</filename>, and
><filename>build</filename>.
>             The default task is <filename>build</filename> and any tasks on which
>it depends
>             build first.
>-            Some tasks exist, such as <filename>devshell</filename>, that are not
>part of the
>+            Some tasks, such as <filename>devshell</filename>, are not
>+ part of the
>             default build chain.
>             If you wish to run a task that is not part of the default build chain, you
>can use the
>             <filename>-c</filename> option in BitBake.
>@@ -479,11 +479,11 @@
>             from your <filename>conf/local.conf</filename> file.
>             However, you should realize that enabling and disabling
>             build history in this manner can change the
>-            <filename>do_package</filename> task checksums, which if you
>+            <filename>do_package</filename> task checksums which, if
>+ you
>             are using the OEBasicHash signature generator (the default
>             for many current distro configurations including
>             <filename>DISTRO = "poky"</filename> and
>-            <filename>DISTRO = ""</filename>) and will result in the packaging
>+            <filename>DISTRO = ""</filename>) will result in the
>+ packaging
>             tasks being re-run during the subsequent build.
>         </para>
>
>
>rday
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